Make Great Character Names

Add Depth and Emotion by Naming Your Characters Carefully

© Camy Tang

Feb 18, 2009
A name is a name, Camy Tang
Be judicious in how you name your characters, paying attention to details and not just name meanings, in order to add color, depth, and power to your characters.

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When naming characters, many writers only pay attention to how a name sounds or what a name means, but there are other things to keep in mind when you name your characters.

Choosing a good name and paying attention to certain details can:

  • Add power and depth to a character

  • Make the manuscript less confusing

  • Make the manuscript more polished and professional

  • Create smoother reading pace

  • Evoke an emotional reaction in your reader

Choose a Name With Meaning

These days, the Internet has many resources to find names and their meanings. Any baby name site will offer almost too many to sift through.

A name with a strong meaning can add power and depth to a character. A prosecutor named Mark Justice can evoke subtle emotional reactions in the reader.

On the other hand, be aware that a name with a not-so-obvious meaning might fly right over the head of a reader. For example, “Alexis” means “defender” but not every reader is going to know that, and the name won’t evoke the same kind of emotion in the readers who don’t know the meaning.

Take advantage of names that will evoke a certain type of emotional response in your reader: Paul Smith versus Paul Snipe, or Yvonne Warren versus Athena Warren.

Pay Attention To Historical Context

Choose names appropriate to the historical time period. Do not name your ancient Roman citizen Seamus or your Regency heroine Yasmin.

Even if your story is set in current day, pay attention to the age of your character and choose a name appropriate to the character’s gender, age, generation, and ethnicity: Cassiopeia versus Carol versus Caitlyn versus Carlotta.

Avoid Confusion for the Reader

Reading has auditory elements as well as visual elements, so writers should try to address both and eliminate as much confusion as possible for the reader.

Choose distinct names for each character to help the reader more easily distinguish between them. Every little detail helps the reader and can ease reading flow.

  • Try to avoid names that start with the same letter: Mark and Mel.

  • Also try to avoid names that sound similar: Rick and Nick

  • Try to have characters’ names have different numbers of syllables: John and Roy versus John and Royden.

  • While in reality, parents name siblings with similar names, try to avoid this for fiction: Katie and Kathy versus Katie and Michelle.
Changing Names is Easy

Even if you’ve already started your story with one name, just use the “Find” and “Replace” function in your word processing program to change a character’s name. You might be glad you did—changing a name or two might smooth your story’s reading flow or evoke a stronger emotional reaction in your reader.


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Comments
Feb 18, 2009 3:32 AM
Garridon :
Another thing worth noting is that even having characters starting with the same first letter can be confusing--especially if they're in the same scene together. Obviously, with some books, it's not possible to always start with a different letter. But I think a good practice is to avoid using the same starting letter of your main characters for any other character. At least, that helps avoid confusion with him.
Feb 19, 2009 6:30 AM
Guest :
I'm reading a book right now that has a Solomon and a Sawyer. For the first few chapters I had to keep flipping back through the pages to make sure I knew which guy I was reading about. It took me out of the story each time. Once I got to know the characters it was fine and the book is great. If you have to have character names with the same first letter, at least introduce them several chapters apart so your reader has time to adjust.
Feb 19, 2009 2:28 PM
Camy Tang :
Good point--sometimes when you HAVE to have certain names, introducing them separately will help the reader keep them straight.
Camy
Apr 29, 2009 7:25 PM
Guest :
Agree with Garridon. In Twilight, there's James, Jasper and Jacob. And Edward, Emmett and Esme who all live together. I think the smae letter thing is okay if it's really different--Jessica and James for example(hey...Jessica is in Twilight too). But something like Jesse and Jessica, or Allie and Alexi...no.
Apr 29, 2009 7:48 PM
Camy Tang :
Ultimately, you can have whatever character name you want. It's YOUR BOOK. But in general, names with the same letter can sometimes be confusing to your reader.
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